I look into my glass对镜
本帖最后由 齐云 于 2018-12-29 09:34 编辑I look into my glass
By Htomas Handy
I look into my glass,
And view my wasting skin,
And say,`Would God it came to pass
My heart had shrunk as thin!`
For then,I,undistrest
By hearts grown cold to me,
Could lonely wait my endless rest
With equanimity.
But Time,to make me grieve,
Part steals,lets part abide;
And shakes this fragile frame at eve
With throbbing of noontide.
对镜（律式音节诗）
文/托马斯•哈代译/齐云
对镜细察容貌
唯觉苍颜衰朽
但求上帝满足祈祷
让心一同陈旧
那样人情转淡
我也不会悲戚
就能默默忍受孤单
等待永久安息
时光赠我悲伤
是它半留半窃
留下这颗壮年心脏
暮岁胸中跳跃
译后记：多年后重译此诗，对汉诗格律的理解已有精进，更能体会原作风格。哈代此诗笔老如杜，不用虚词，全用二字步，可合沉郁顿挫之风格？
喜看齐云兄译了这么多好诗，专门下载了个有道词典，挺方便呢。 聿归 发表于 2018-12-21 19:57
喜看齐云兄译了这么多好诗，专门下载了个有道词典，挺方便呢。
他山之石，可以攻玉
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