齐云 发表于 2019-1-3 09:57:17

Yong Love(VII)少女的爱之七

Yong Love(VII)

By Sara Tealsdale

I sent my love a letter,
And if he loves me not,
    He shall not find my love for him
In any line or dot.

But if he loves me truly
He'll find it hidden deep,
    As dawn gleams red thro' chilly clouds
To eyes awaked from sleep.

少女的爱之七

文/莎拉•蒂斯黛尔译/齐云

给他写信一封
   如果对我无爱
情意深藏于每个字中
   他看也看不明白

如果真的爱我
   自会察觉我爱
犹如晨起看寒云朵朵
   红曦正透露过来

译后记:原诗抑扬格,每节一、二、四行三步,第三行四步,偶行韵。



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