标题: 五绝●随韵联和幽幽元宵赐句 [打印本页]

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作者: 马上    时间: 2012-5-26 11:43     标题: 五绝●随韵联和幽幽元宵赐句

五绝●随韵联和幽幽元宵赐句
——谢幽幽元宵赠和，玉赐佳句“诗意写人生，墨笔同天下”，随韵联和一绝

文/马上

良宵随妙韵，
诗意写人生；
墨笔同天下，
奇思律有情。

（2012年2月6日元宵节）

附幽幽昨夜临屏赠译

Quatrain Minor-To Follow Angela Ren's Dedication:
  
To Follow Angela  Ren's Inscription at the Lantern Festival: To give our life a rare compostion, With pen and ink we paint the world the same

By Ma Derong
Tr. Angela Ren

Tonight so good, we play a rhyming game
To give our life a rare composition
With pen and ink we paint the world the same
Each line well versed carries our emotion
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自联一绝

文/马上

墨笔同天下，
奇思律有情；
齐心驱日月，
合力谱新声。

（2012年2月15日）

再附幽幽赐译

Quatrain Minor●While we co-compose our new vocation

By Ma Derong
Tr. Angela Ren

We depict the world and its every part
Our novel thoughts spring up with emotion
We chase the sun and moon with jointed heart
While we co-compose our new vocation

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作者: 青木之灵    时间: 2012-5-27 01:54

唱和皆雅！

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