标题: 一江秋水/齐云译齐云《半圆》 [打印本页]

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作者: 齐云    时间: 2013-5-15 09:04     标题: 一江秋水/齐云译齐云《半圆》

The Semicircle

When I was a baby
The semicircle meant the profile of my mother breasts
It was my food
  and my hope

When I was a teens
The semicircle referred to the tomb on the ground
Where my grandmother
   had slept

When I was a youth
The semicircle was half moon in the night sky
The most ruthless thing was
  time and space.

Now I am an adult
The semicircle is anything in the world
My life is more than half
  half joy, half sad

半圆

小时候
母亲侧影衣襟下半圆形的乳房
是我的期望
我的食粮

后来呵
地平线上半圆形的坟墓
外婆就躺在
里面长眠

而现在
遥看夜空中半圆形的月亮
无情最是这
空间时间

最后呵
才明白人间一切都是半圆
此生已过半
尝了悲欢


The Semicircle    译文/一江秋水

When I was a baby
The semicircle meant two beasts of my mother
It was my food
   and my hope

When I was a child
The semicircle referred to the tomb on the ground
It was the place
   my grandmother has slept

When I was a youth
The semicircle was half moon at night
It was time passed
   and space lost

Now I am a adult
The semicircle is the life of my past
It was half joy
   and half sad

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作者: 齐云    时间: 2013-5-15 09:05

译笔生硬之处都是齐云自译且保留的部分。

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作者: 诗酒自娱    时间: 2013-5-15 16:13

希望一江秋水成为诗歌翻译家和双语诗人！

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作者: 齐云    时间: 2013-5-16 15:28

把一江秋水译的全文还是补上，她的译文更流畅，虽然意思有所损失，担这恐怕也是没有办法的事。

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