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微斋先生发表于 2007-7-29 09:08 | 只看该作者

[原创] 泛舟读海

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<p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 65pt; mso-char-indent-count: 2.5;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 26pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体;"><font color="#ff00ff">泛舟读海 <span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span><span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 28pt; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; FONT-FAMILY: 黑体;"><p><font color="#ff00ff"> <font size="3">                     (三步七言整齐式)</font></font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">我划着小船读海<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">随浪潮上下翻腾<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">近处是群鸥乱飞<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">远处是一望无垠<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font color="#ff6600"> </font></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">太阳在云间微笑<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">水面是波光盈盈<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">有轮从前方驶过<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">送来了阵阵波沦<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font color="#ff6600"> </font></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">大海是多么豪放<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">好一篇浪漫诗文<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">在舟中尽情品读<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">体验这壮美风情<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><p><font color="#ff6600"> </font></p></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">我心中也有大海<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">风光同样的迷人<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">她正在海中弄桨<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 55.4pt; LINE-HEIGHT: 26pt; mso-char-indent-count: 3.45; mso-line-height-rule: exactly;"><b style="mso-bidi-font-weight: normal;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 16pt; FONT-FAMILY: 楷体_GB2312;"><font color="#ff6600">此刻正波涛难平<span lang="EN-US"><p></p></span></font></span></b></p>

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诗酒自娱发表于 2007-7-29 12:29 | 只看该作者

从眼中大海,联想心中大海,构思巧妙.

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雨行发表于 2007-7-29 13:49 | 只看该作者

微斋先生这首诗歌大处着眼，意象广阔，文笔自然，我需学习之

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诗酒自娱发表于 2007-7-29 17:34 | 只看该作者

欢迎雨行新朋友!

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微斋先生发表于 2007-7-29 17:45 | 只看该作者

谢站长及雨行先生鼓励!

欢迎雨行先生光临本坛!

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唐古拉山风语者发表于 2007-7-29 17:54 | 只看该作者

由大海及心海,诗意新颖,过渡自然,比喻贴切.

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秋水涟滟发表于 2007-7-29 18:36 | 只看该作者

海可读，缘于心可读，海可动心，缘于情可动心。眼前景心中情，暗里巧妙相连。推。

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秋水涟滟发表于 2007-8-6 22:37 | 只看该作者

再读，情景自然联接，心曲油然而生。精了。