[原创] 捣练子二首 病中吟

天雨

                                                  看病                                                                                                                                       

      穿隧洞，过立交，一路轻松解逝潮。高九路新平坦道，妪翁飞向石门桥。                                                                                               

 

                                                  服药                                                                                                                                       

      莲笛片，紫龙金，水剂金汤转病程。红绿配双均送下，乐观甘苦病中人。

 

天雨

         对不起，这问题现在才回答：忘乎所以也！一笑！

凤舞九天

一路轻松解逝潮——这一句没太读懂。

 

欢迎天雨，常来。